tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1781345138400006627.post4598682515735001476..comments2023-10-22T05:28:25.250-07:00Comments on BIKHARE SITARE: बिखरे सितारे: सितम यह भी था..kshamahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14115656986166219821noreply@blogger.comBlogger8125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1781345138400006627.post-19493150583093808822010-08-13T12:17:24.855-07:002010-08-13T12:17:24.855-07:00कहानी का फ्लो अच्छा जा रहा है । चलिये पूजा के जेठ ...कहानी का फ्लो अच्छा जा रहा है । चलिये पूजा के जेठ जिठानी तो उसपर विश्वास करते थे । ढूबते को तिनके का सहारा ।Asha Joglekarhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05351082141819705264noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1781345138400006627.post-22770154544496701772010-08-09T08:18:38.211-07:002010-08-09T08:18:38.211-07:00Kshma ji, namaskar..!
Sach kahun to main bahut di...Kshma ji, namaskar..!<br /><br />Sach kahun to main bahut dinon se apni kavita par aapki tippani ki pratiksha kar raha tha.. Khair der sahi par aapne naumeed na hone diya eske liye aapka shukrguzar hun..<br /><br />Yah kahani main silsilevar pahle bhi padh chuka hun.. (Apni lambi tippaniyon ke sath...wo bhi pata nahi aapne padhin athwa nahi...) so main aajkal takreeban maun hun.. Haan jaise hi kahani aage badhegi, joki abhi kuchh dinon main hone wala hah.. Main punah es yatra main shamil milunga.. Par aapse anurodh hai ki krupya yun hi apni tippaniyon se meri kavitaon ko alunkrut karte rahiyega..<br /><br />Thnx a lot..<br /><br />DEEPAK..Deepak Shuklahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02437731202200979518noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1781345138400006627.post-31675964544289662222010-08-09T04:44:05.993-07:002010-08-09T04:44:05.993-07:00aise kirdaar bhi milte hain jindagi me.........:(
...aise kirdaar bhi milte hain jindagi me.........:(<br /><br />aage dekhen......मुकेश कुमार सिन्हाhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14131032296544030044noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1781345138400006627.post-48812705081572253332010-08-09T04:34:03.522-07:002010-08-09T04:34:03.522-07:00बढ़िया भावपूर्ण कहानी...बढ़िया भावपूर्ण कहानी...arvindhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15562030349519088493noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1781345138400006627.post-52701664536092364792010-08-09T03:00:54.198-07:002010-08-09T03:00:54.198-07:00mujhe lag raha hai ki mai ye kadee bahut pahile pa...mujhe lag raha hai ki mai ye kadee bahut pahile pad chukee hoo .Apanatvahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07788229863280826201noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1781345138400006627.post-72931600533012021672010-08-08T18:09:31.429-07:002010-08-08T18:09:31.429-07:00पढ़ रहा हूं ! सोचता हूं कि क्या इंसान , हमेशा इंसा...पढ़ रहा हूं ! सोचता हूं कि क्या इंसान , हमेशा इंसान बना रह पाता है ?उम्मतेंhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11664798385096309812noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1781345138400006627.post-67474479487274477872010-08-08T11:33:19.724-07:002010-08-08T11:33:19.724-07:00कहानी की गंभीरता व रोचकता बरक़रार है, क्षमा जी बहुत...कहानी की गंभीरता व रोचकता बरक़रार है, क्षमा जी बहुत सुंदर चित्रण.रचना दीक्षितhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10298077073448653913noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1781345138400006627.post-8853495790122343872010-08-08T11:26:27.060-07:002010-08-08T11:26:27.060-07:00रोचकता बरकरार...बढ़िया भावपूर्ण कहानी...रोचकता बरकरार...बढ़िया भावपूर्ण कहानी...विनोद कुमार पांडेयhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17755015886999311114noreply@blogger.com